Wednesday, May 26, 2010

Guest post: Lost in Translation

I recently asked if anyone would be interested in guest posting here on In Spring it is the Dawn, on a topic about Japan or Japanese literature. Well, the very kind Tony, of Tony's Reading List has written a great post on the importance of translators for us. Tony is a big fan of Japanese literature and has spent some time in Japan, and has a fabulous sense of humour. Tony also just welcomed a new member to his family, adorable little Hayley.  If you haven't yet I really recommend you stop by his blog, you're sure to be both enlightened and entertained, perhaps at the same time.  But without further ado, here for your reading pleasure...


Lost in Translation - by Tony Malone

Michael Emmerich, Stephen Snyder, Ivan Morris, E. Dale Saunders: these are not names which most people would recognise. However, you, dear reader, an avid follower as you are of Tanabata's blog, should be praising these literary marvels to the skies, for without them your lives would be bereft of joy and laughter. Well, slightly bereft, anyway. You see, the above-mentioned writers are among that legion of unsung heroes who bring the wonders of Japanese literature to the unfortunates among us who have trouble distinguishing kanji from hieroglyphs. They are, of course, translators.


We owe literary translators an awful lot, and yet we treat them so badly. Often their names are hidden away in font size 3 on the page with all the boring information we can't bring ourselves to glance at - if they're lucky. Occasionally, their names are simply not there at all, as if the translator is of no more importance than the proofreader or the boy who brings the editor his tea in the morning. What kind of way is this to treat artists who, in reality, are creating unique original pieces of art from a foreign source? Unfortunately, as long as many people still see translating as a mechanical process involving a computer, a dictionary and a bucketful of coffee, Snyder and co. will fail to get the recognition they deserve.

The importance of translators is especially important when it comes to languages such as Japanese. As most of you will no doubt know, the Japanese use three different types of symbols to record ideas (in addition to the romaji, or roman script, which occasionally creeps in): katakana (a syllabary for expressing foreign words); hiragana (a syllabary for expressing Japanese words, usually prepositions and verb endings); and kanji (a collection of pictograms adapted from Chinese specifically to torture unsuspecting Westerners who want to learn the language). When I left Japan eight years ago, I had just about become an intermediate-level speaker (on a good day) of Japanese. If I were to work with non-native speakers of English at the same level, I would be using carefully selected newspaper articles with helpful vocabulary hints. By the end of my Japanese studies, I was able to struggle through a Japanese translation of The Ugly Duckling. You can infer from this that my chances of reading The Wind-Up Bird Chronicle in the original are fairly slim.

Assuming then that your kanji skills are not up to scratch, you're going to have to trust to a translation to enjoy the delights of J-Lit. However, if you don't actually read the original text, then how do you know that you are reading what the writer wanted you to read? Are you reading the same book? The best translators are able to transfer the ideas across into idiomatic English while preserving the unique flavour that sets the author apart. Even in English, Mishima and Murakami have a distinct, consistent style which attracts the reader (in fact, some of Murakami's detractors, the cynics that they are, say that his translators - Jay Rubin, Phillip Gabriel and Alfred Birnbaum - actually make him look better than he is!). On the whole, translators of Japanese works seem to do a pretty good job of capturing those quintessentially Japanese elements and making them comprehensible to an English-speaking audience.

However, there are some occasions where I have my doubts. One Japanese writer whose translations I'm a little suspicious of is Banana Yoshimoto. I love her prose and stretches of descriptive writing, but I really, really get annoyed by the trite, stilted, perhaps over-Americanised dialogue. Michael Emmerich's translation of Goodbye Tsugumi and Russel F. Wasden's translation of Amrita are the two books I'm thinking of when I write this, and being unable to check with the original, it's difficult to know the reason for my unease. As both translators are American (and probably writing for an American audience), it's probably understandable that Yoshimoto's characters come across as classic US-TV teens. Still, that doesn't explain the abundance of cliches and set phrases, which sound suspiciously like literal translations of formulaic Japanese conversational turns. Another explanation is that Yoshimoto is just really bad at dialogue. Or I may just be completely wrong - the point is that we'll never know.

Some translations can also seem a little dated, and the language chosen to convey the Japanese meaning now appears bizarre and distracting. Edward Seidensticker's translation of Tanizaki's The Makioka Sisters (which has a footnote explaining what sushi means!) is one example which comes to mind. Another is provided by Aiko Ito and Graeme Wilson's translation of Soseki Natsume's I Am a Cat, where they decided to translate the names of the major characters into English to bring across the puns in their names - which, in my opinion, has the unintended effect of making the protagonists slightly less Japanese than desired. Still, this is not an uncommon issue with translating: even the legendary Constance Garnett, the woman who brought the great Russian classics to life for Anglophone readers, was criticised for making Russian serfs talk with a Cockney accent...

While I am an avid reader, I do not have the time (or energy) to undertake extensive research into the differences between translations of the same work (although I have heard of some stylistic differences between different versions of one of Murakami's novels), and I definitely have no chance of becoming fluent in written Japanese any time soon, so I suppose I will just have to continue to rely on other people to do the work for me. Therefore, I would like to finish this post by paraphrasing ABBA (who needed no translators: they changed the words to Waterloo from Swedish to English all by themselves):

I say thank you for the translations - and giving them to me :)



Thanks so much Tony! Good translation really is an artform!

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8 comments:

  1. This is a wonderfully written post, Tony. Translations make such a world of difference.

    I've even found that some books that I disliked - that were translated - ended up being due to the translation.

    It takes the right person with a deep knowledge of the language in question to do a book justice.

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  2. I agree, translations do make a big difference to your reading experience. Although I never consciously thought about the translation while reading, I'm now beginning to appreciate it more, especially with Japanese fiction. Another brilliant post as usual!

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  3. Some of my favourite pieces of writing are translations - Borges, Pamuk, Homer, Dante, the Arabian Nights. In fact, I'm hard-pressed to count on one hand my favourite English-language authors. More recently, I have taken an interest in Japanese literature. Equipped with little more than a few Japanese words remembered from high school, I would get nowhere without English translations. The Dazais and the Natsumes would remain a mystery to me.

    I can't imagine what my reading experience would be without translations, so I agree - a thank you is in order. Good post.

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  4. Domo arigato gozaimasu~~~ :)

    Of course, having written such a holier-than-thou post, I now realise that I have only ever mentioned the translator in my reviews when I wanted to complain: oops...

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  5. Thanks for your lovely post Tony!

    I try to give credit to translators because they have such an ungrateful job sometimes... Some of my best friends are translators! ;) Not from Japanese though.

    I'm afraid I have the Seidensticker translation of The Makioka Sisters waiting on my shelf for the next read-along ;\ Hmpf.

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  6. I have to admit that I never really considered translators before I started blogging. However, blogging has made me appreciate them so much more. I haven't read any Japanese Literature (but I'm hoping that will change soon!), but I'm currently reading a translation of Anna Karenina that is definitely not the best one around and it has opened my eyes to the importance of translators. They really deserve a lot more recognition than they're getting.

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  7. Don't worry too much! I'm sure you'll enjoy 'The Makioka Sisters'. I think I was expecting a bit more from it than I got, so blaming the translator was the easy way out ;)

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  8. Very well-stated, Tony. I have to admit to not giving much more than a simple look to see who the translator is in a lot of books. You are right that translators don't get enough credit.

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